ok hears your replys to kals quote
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Jonny-
heaven falls...and i do hear...the light of reason beckoning me...only when i see the light...of the will...that falls before me...only i have begun to see.....that the heaven which i have been following...is nothing more...snow..with out wind...yet maybe if i try harder..and continue searching for it..heaven will...show itself...and open up..to me and my soul...when the snow begins to fall..with out wind..i will begin the search i have layed upon my self..as a guise..as...my only path...my only starguise: an oath that the gods can punish you for.
Jesse-
the snow falls without wind
just like the pain im in
waiting for spring so i can see you again
but untill the snow falls again
i bid you farewell....
Heaen knows no bounds..
If heaven knows no bounds
does that mean I can make it ther to?
Will my sins be forgiven by god?
I guess my real question is, is ther even a god?
You may think im crazy for questioning him
but I have reason to.
If god loves all his children then why are some above the rest?
Why is ther poverty and famin?
Death and destruction?
And why must I question his belife?
beacuse what I dont understand
is how can god let his own kids suffer?
I've given up hope and I've stopped trying to belive something
that has never belived in me
Till the end of time I....
jesse-
swore I would love you to the end of time I said i would and I will.
Everything I've done I did for you.
Lived,laughed,smiled, everything good I've done.
Lied,cried,killed,everything bad under the sun.
So now its the end of my time,
I'll end it with this gun.
ok ok I know it was a bit to dark but*shrugs* hey thats who I am.
dont be afraid of the future.
It will unfold before your eyes.
It could be beautiful.
It could be ugly.
You can never tell...
Chose your path wisly.
It could lead you to hell...
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Jonny-
heaven falls...and i do hear...the light of reason beckoning me...only when i see the light...of the will...that falls before me...only i have begun to see.....that the heaven which i have been following...is nothing more...snow..with out wind...yet maybe if i try harder..and continue searching for it..heaven will...show itself...and open up..to me and my soul...when the snow begins to fall..with out wind..i will begin the search i have layed upon my self..as a guise..as...my only path...my only starguise: an oath that the gods can punish you for.
Jesse-
the snow falls without wind
just like the pain im in
waiting for spring so i can see you again
but untill the snow falls again
i bid you farewell....
Heaen knows no bounds..
If heaven knows no bounds
does that mean I can make it ther to?
Will my sins be forgiven by god?
I guess my real question is, is ther even a god?
You may think im crazy for questioning him
but I have reason to.
If god loves all his children then why are some above the rest?
Why is ther poverty and famin?
Death and destruction?
And why must I question his belife?
beacuse what I dont understand
is how can god let his own kids suffer?
I've given up hope and I've stopped trying to belive something
that has never belived in me
Till the end of time I....
jesse-
swore I would love you to the end of time I said i would and I will.
Everything I've done I did for you.
Lived,laughed,smiled, everything good I've done.
Lied,cried,killed,everything bad under the sun.
So now its the end of my time,
I'll end it with this gun.
ok ok I know it was a bit to dark but*shrugs* hey thats who I am.
dont be afraid of the future.
It will unfold before your eyes.
It could be beautiful.
It could be ugly.
You can never tell...
Chose your path wisly.
It could lead you to hell...
posted by The whisper in your ear at 8:17 PM
10 Comments:
Joneus,
Don't hate me for this. But this sooooo sounds like it needs to be in a musical. A rock musical. Or a heavy metal rock opera. Yep. I loved it. That's my totally unbiased opinion. I really enjoyed it. Uh-huh.
Wow, I'm totally rambling.
See what you did? Stupid songwriter!!! *shakes fist*
*cough* Good work, wingy.
Love,
Kalinka.
Dear Jesse,
I don't see how you could call that crappy. You rhymed *and* made it sound good! That's not something many poets can say they've done. Have more faith in yourself girl! =^_^=
Love,
Kalinka.
Hey Jesse.
It's really good, and being as religious as I am, I laughed at it (no I am not Christian). I am a Luciferian, nothing bad, I just honestly dislike Christians and I worship the God of Enlightenment. Also, it'd be awesome for a song!
- Sarah (badgies)
Hey Jesse.
'Tis a really good thing you wrote. And I am glad I had that talk to you last night. Keep up the work, this is really, really good. We have a few songs with themes like that, but we're usually about war and cannibalism.
Talk to you later.
- David (Bathory17)
Hey Jesse,
I liked your take on "Heaven Knows No Bounds". And yeah, what's wrong with questioning? That's the only way you'll ever get to know yourself.
Only *you* can decide what *you* believe.
Nice job,
-Kal.
Dear Jesse,
Your post for the "Heaven Knows No Bounds" phrase provides some interesting insight on your beliefs.
I'm not knocking your beliefs, I would never consider doing something like that. I also don't expect to sway you with what I'm about to say. I merely feel that it should be said. So anyway, here goes nothing. I hope you don't get offended my this, that is not my intent.
I just want to say that God really shouldn't interfere with our lives, difficulty and hardship allow each of us to grow. God certainly has the power to fix all of our problems for us, but where is the fun in that?
I personally think of religion as more of a series of teachings, guidelines to follow so that humanity can strive to make the whole world a better place without the need for divine intervention.
As I said before none of this is intended to offend. But I apologize in advance if it did, if that is the case, I must have misworded this.
Marr Vell
allo!
I have to admit it Jesse, when it comes to being dark, you're the supreme self-appointed military dictator. Just as long as you don't actually kill yourself.
Marr Vell
Brutal. I hope you're actually okay. :S (Well-written, too.)
Hugs and sunshine,
Kalinka.
I gotta say Jesse, your writings never fail to be dark. It's kind of strange, maybe because I've never actually met you outside of Runescape, but you don't seem like all that dark of a person. Maybe it's just me.
Marr Vell
I guess all our choices could lead us to Hell if we let them. But I think most of us have some since, at least, of where our choice will lead us before we make it - at least whether or not it's good or bad.
Hope things are okay with you,
Kal.
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