Ok Hears my submisson for lightinging blog.
"when feelings get in the way"
"Mom" asked a little girl,"why have you and dad bin togther so long?"
"Well dear, Me and your father share a special bond"
"what does THAT mean mommy?"
"Well dear me and your father know eachother so well that we have fallen so in love and we cant be seperated."
"oh alright.Thanks mommy." The little girl ran outside to catch the school bus.
The father came down the stairs with a worried look on his face.
"what is it dear?" said the woman.
"We need to talk...You know how ive bin going bowling every friday with the boys?"
"uhh yeah. Why?"
"Well...."
--1 hour later--
With her bags packed and tears in her eyes she drove away form that house. The memories and the heartache.How could he?
"Mommy" came the little girls voice form behinde her.
"yes yes what is it?"
"Why do we have to stay with grandma and grandpa? Why cant we go home to daddy?" she asked.How inncoent and pure. Shes so un aware of what went on.
"well sweety.. This is what happens when feelings get in the way."
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Hope you liked it!!!!!!!!
"when feelings get in the way"
"Mom" asked a little girl,"why have you and dad bin togther so long?"
"Well dear, Me and your father share a special bond"
"what does THAT mean mommy?"
"Well dear me and your father know eachother so well that we have fallen so in love and we cant be seperated."
"oh alright.Thanks mommy." The little girl ran outside to catch the school bus.
The father came down the stairs with a worried look on his face.
"what is it dear?" said the woman.
"We need to talk...You know how ive bin going bowling every friday with the boys?"
"uhh yeah. Why?"
"Well...."
--1 hour later--
With her bags packed and tears in her eyes she drove away form that house. The memories and the heartache.How could he?
"Mommy" came the little girls voice form behinde her.
"yes yes what is it?"
"Why do we have to stay with grandma and grandpa? Why cant we go home to daddy?" she asked.How inncoent and pure. Shes so un aware of what went on.
"well sweety.. This is what happens when feelings get in the way."
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Hope you liked it!!!!!!!!
posted by The whisper in your ear at 7:15 PM
3 Comments:
Jesse,
BON TRAVAILLE! (Good work.)
I knew you had this in you. Super-congratulations, I really liked this.
More please!
-Kalinka
Magnifique! Vous-avez ecrit une histoire vraiement bien!
Quick question though, why is that one line blanked out so that the only way to read it is to highlight it?
Great comment again, like the last one it was something I could really work with. Thanks.
Marr Vell
I do not know. strange........
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