"oh wont you grow up!!" Is the phrase marr gave me to work with.
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Bessie walked briskly down the hall."Crap,going to be late again." She spead into class right as the bell rang. She took her seat at the back,like usual. As the teacher started the class bessie found her mind wandering again. All she could think about was her boyfriend and what its gunna be like when she see's him. The sudden slap of a ruler on a desk cut into her thoughts."BESSIE! WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT DAY DREAMIN IN MY CLASS!!"her teacher yelled in her british accent."And what did i say about that make up! it makes you look ugly!"Bessie gave her one of thoes" why do you go die somewher" kinda looks. Her teacher walked back up to her desk. She tryed avoiding the burning eyes of her class mates."Why do they hate me? Oh they all need to grow up and figure out what individuality is!!" she though. Her cell phone wrang. She awnserd it quietly.
"hello?"
"Yeah bess hi."
"Oh hey shawn. What's up?"
"uhh Can I talk to you?"
"Sure.What is it?"
"Well you know how we live far away and all right? Well....I hope you dont mind but... I found someone closer."
Bessie threw the phone at the wall and ran out. She could hear people calling her name but she couldnt give 2 fucks. With her mascara running down her face she ran into the washroom. "something....sharp..."She scanned the room and layed her eyes upon the mirror."ah ha!" She ran over and punched it. It fell to the floor and she picked up a peice. How could he have found someone new!!! After everything! He should just grow up!!! someone closer!!! HA! Now he'll pay. She put a razor sharp peice of glass to her arm and took a deep breath. With all her might she pressed down and watched ass the blood surrounded the glass. She dropped the glass and sat down. Now..Time to wait. She watched as the blood poured out. "why arent i dying!!!!"She sobbed. Musnt have bin deep enough. She picked up the same peice of glass again and put it to her wrist again. Wait.She move it up to her neck.She took another deep breath adn pulled back hard. She fell over coughing and watched as her world went dark.
When she woke up all she saw was shawns face. She tryed to speak but no words came out. She would feel the tears welting up in her eyes. "It's ok baby, I'm hear now. Dont worry." She mannaged to get out a scentance"I thought you found someone new." "I thought I did to. It turns out that she wasnt for me. I knew who I loved and I left what I had. I'm an idiot. I understand if you dont wanna be with me.I'll leave now." Bessie grabbed his arm. "Stay."she croacked. He smield and she smield back.
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Bessie walked briskly down the hall."Crap,going to be late again." She spead into class right as the bell rang. She took her seat at the back,like usual. As the teacher started the class bessie found her mind wandering again. All she could think about was her boyfriend and what its gunna be like when she see's him. The sudden slap of a ruler on a desk cut into her thoughts."BESSIE! WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT DAY DREAMIN IN MY CLASS!!"her teacher yelled in her british accent."And what did i say about that make up! it makes you look ugly!"Bessie gave her one of thoes" why do you go die somewher" kinda looks. Her teacher walked back up to her desk. She tryed avoiding the burning eyes of her class mates."Why do they hate me? Oh they all need to grow up and figure out what individuality is!!" she though. Her cell phone wrang. She awnserd it quietly.
"hello?"
"Yeah bess hi."
"Oh hey shawn. What's up?"
"uhh Can I talk to you?"
"Sure.What is it?"
"Well you know how we live far away and all right? Well....I hope you dont mind but... I found someone closer."
Bessie threw the phone at the wall and ran out. She could hear people calling her name but she couldnt give 2 fucks. With her mascara running down her face she ran into the washroom. "something....sharp..."She scanned the room and layed her eyes upon the mirror."ah ha!" She ran over and punched it. It fell to the floor and she picked up a peice. How could he have found someone new!!! After everything! He should just grow up!!! someone closer!!! HA! Now he'll pay. She put a razor sharp peice of glass to her arm and took a deep breath. With all her might she pressed down and watched ass the blood surrounded the glass. She dropped the glass and sat down. Now..Time to wait. She watched as the blood poured out. "why arent i dying!!!!"She sobbed. Musnt have bin deep enough. She picked up the same peice of glass again and put it to her wrist again. Wait.She move it up to her neck.She took another deep breath adn pulled back hard. She fell over coughing and watched as her world went dark.
When she woke up all she saw was shawns face. She tryed to speak but no words came out. She would feel the tears welting up in her eyes. "It's ok baby, I'm hear now. Dont worry." She mannaged to get out a scentance"I thought you found someone new." "I thought I did to. It turns out that she wasnt for me. I knew who I loved and I left what I had. I'm an idiot. I understand if you dont wanna be with me.I'll leave now." Bessie grabbed his arm. "Stay."she croacked. He smield and she smield back.
posted by The whisper in your ear at 5:49 PM
4 Comments:
JessJessJesseJessJess!
Nice work! You = talented.
On a more serious note, though I mentioned it to you already, that last paragraph seemed as though it was a dream sequence. I know now that it wasn't. But it still could be interpretted that way. I just wanted to mention that here incase someone else got the same idea.
Marr Vell
I probably should've posted this last night. But I waited so I could try and get the words right. I probably don't have them perfectly the way I would want them yet, but it's got to be said.
What Bessie did in this story, was wrong. No boy is worth that. No matter how you think he'll make you feel, no boy is worth your own life.
I apologize if I hurt your feelings, but I had to tell you this.
Marr vell
You did'nt hurt my feelings. It's true. But alas, I am the dramatic type as you know and it is an impulse to me. Without thinking us "dramatics" would do something so stupid as to even shed a tear over a boy. I know no boy is worth it. No one is worth it. If your meant to be they wouldnt hurt you like that. And about the last pharagraph it was suposed to be up to your imaginations but hear is that little part in ther :
The washroom door burst open. Ther lay bessie in a pool of her own blood.She knew she was dying. She could hear people but she couldnt make out what they wer saying."Why do I never cut deep enough?" she thought to herself. She opend her eyes weakly to see her class standing around her. She closed her eyes and her world went black again.
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Ther. Kinda crappy I know. Marr thank you for the talent comment although I dont think of myself as talented...I dont think of myself as anything good but hey, we all have our flaws.(And I know I said alot of this stuff has something to do with my life...dont worry. I'm Dumb but not that dumb. I would never go so far as to slit my own throat.) Anyways, Hope you all like it.
Dont worry marr,
Jesse..Not bessie..or am i? hmnnnn.
Well, I hope you're not Bessie - I really do. But, I'm pretty sure you're not. You couldn't be. I mean, didn't you say you *hated* that name?
(Stating apparently facts) love,
Kalinka the Obvious.
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