"The rocks below" is the phrase Kal gave me to write about.
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"We'll Ditch the body's hear." Spike said after taking a drag of his cigarette. Jay nodded and took a deep breath."What a horrible night" she thought to herself."Hey you ok kiddo?" He said garbbing her arm.Jay looked up into spike's crystal blue eyes. She closed her eyes and shook her head trying to hold back the tears."Spike we killed someone! Of course I'm not ok!! What if we get busted!! I'll never see you again! You'll be bubba's new bitch in the big house!!!!"Jay cried. He grabbed her shoulders."Jay,babe, Come on. We'll be fine!! Look if it will make you feel better we'll skip town.Start a new life in....canada I guess." She nodded as hot tear's rolled down her cheeks. Spike whipped them away."I wouldnt let anything happen to you. I gave you my ring remeber?" Jay looked at the big ring on her finger."alright"she mutterd in a quiet voice."Now, Help me lug this guys body out. We'll throw him over the cliff. No one will find it down ther.She nodded and grabbed his legs.She shiverd at the thought of acctualy touching a dead guy. Spike was only trying to protect her. She thought of last night and how she wishes it never happend.
"Come on baby he'll never find out." Mike said pressing her up aginst the wall."GET AWAY FROM ME CREEP!" she pushed him off of her.He grabbed her arm and threw her back up against the wall."Now, we can do this the easy way or you can experience the hard way." he mutterd.She broke free of him but he hit her. She hit the floor pretty hard. "HEY!! WHAT THE HELL MAN!!she heard spikes voice from behinde her. The last thing she her was spike yelling and then it went black.
She awoke to see spike standing over mike. Mike lay on the ground motionless. "Spike...Wha..?"she touched her head gingerly."fuck...." Why wasnet mike moving? What had spike done to him?"Jay...Are you ok hun? I heard you scream and I ran. OH no!! Your bleeding!!!" Spike franticaly serached through his bad for a cloth."What happend to mike?" Jay said grimly."He's........"Mike looked down."Jay I had to!!He..."mike rambled on about how he was goign to kill him.Jay stared at the blood coverd mike. Ther was a knife in his hand.He was going to kill him."I did'nt mean to hun."she felt spikes arms around her. She helped him drag the now garbage bag wrapped body to the car and threw him in the trunk. They drove as far up north as possible without crossing the border line.They got to the cliff and dragged the body out to the edge."ready?" 1....2....3!"with all her might jay threw the body of the cliff. She watched the body fall and hit the rocks below. For the rest of the night she sat in spikes arms. "I promice nothings guna happen to you"he kissed her cheek. No matter what happend she knew that spike was the one. No matter how horrifying the past night was she knew he loved her. Nothing could tear them apart. Not even death.
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"We'll Ditch the body's hear." Spike said after taking a drag of his cigarette. Jay nodded and took a deep breath."What a horrible night" she thought to herself."Hey you ok kiddo?" He said garbbing her arm.Jay looked up into spike's crystal blue eyes. She closed her eyes and shook her head trying to hold back the tears."Spike we killed someone! Of course I'm not ok!! What if we get busted!! I'll never see you again! You'll be bubba's new bitch in the big house!!!!"Jay cried. He grabbed her shoulders."Jay,babe, Come on. We'll be fine!! Look if it will make you feel better we'll skip town.Start a new life in....canada I guess." She nodded as hot tear's rolled down her cheeks. Spike whipped them away."I wouldnt let anything happen to you. I gave you my ring remeber?" Jay looked at the big ring on her finger."alright"she mutterd in a quiet voice."Now, Help me lug this guys body out. We'll throw him over the cliff. No one will find it down ther.She nodded and grabbed his legs.She shiverd at the thought of acctualy touching a dead guy. Spike was only trying to protect her. She thought of last night and how she wishes it never happend.
"Come on baby he'll never find out." Mike said pressing her up aginst the wall."GET AWAY FROM ME CREEP!" she pushed him off of her.He grabbed her arm and threw her back up against the wall."Now, we can do this the easy way or you can experience the hard way." he mutterd.She broke free of him but he hit her. She hit the floor pretty hard. "HEY!! WHAT THE HELL MAN!!she heard spikes voice from behinde her. The last thing she her was spike yelling and then it went black.
She awoke to see spike standing over mike. Mike lay on the ground motionless. "Spike...Wha..?"she touched her head gingerly."fuck...." Why wasnet mike moving? What had spike done to him?"Jay...Are you ok hun? I heard you scream and I ran. OH no!! Your bleeding!!!" Spike franticaly serached through his bad for a cloth."What happend to mike?" Jay said grimly."He's........"Mike looked down."Jay I had to!!He..."mike rambled on about how he was goign to kill him.Jay stared at the blood coverd mike. Ther was a knife in his hand.He was going to kill him."I did'nt mean to hun."she felt spikes arms around her. She helped him drag the now garbage bag wrapped body to the car and threw him in the trunk. They drove as far up north as possible without crossing the border line.They got to the cliff and dragged the body out to the edge."ready?" 1....2....3!"with all her might jay threw the body of the cliff. She watched the body fall and hit the rocks below. For the rest of the night she sat in spikes arms. "I promice nothings guna happen to you"he kissed her cheek. No matter what happend she knew that spike was the one. No matter how horrifying the past night was she knew he loved her. Nothing could tear them apart. Not even death.
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posted by The whisper in your ear at 5:47 PM
5 Comments:
Ooooh. Not was what I was expecting at all.
Thumbs = up.
(Wrapped in tin foil) cheers,
Kal.
Nice work, Jesse.
Murder is never something to be written about lightly, and you certainly showed that you are aware of this and can write about it tastefully.
As a side note, was Mike about to do to Jay what I thought he was going to do? Just a question.
Marr Vell
Wow jesse at was great! Well I don't like murder but It was well writen! murder does creep me out though oh great now I'm not gunna be able to sleep oh jeash your evil you amazing wrighter. Ahhhh great and i have soccer tomorow!
*pulls out mp3* maby rent will drown my fear... ahhh dead girl friend part now everything will make me think of murder! Sorry I'm babbaling. On and on I babble. See I do get stage fright.... but tomorow is not the kind of fright you would think of. Big game tommorow!Play off for play offs! Gotta win! *starts hiperventalating* omg we have to win. What if I miss the ball or fall again or my knee starts giving me trouble! anyway cross you fingers! and again good job!
Kylaia
Yes marr, He was gunna do her something baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad. Someone was gunna get a hurt reeeeeeeal bad.
DONT DO IT!!,
Jesse
What if it too late?
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