Alright by popular demand(Yes marr, I decided to write this beacuse of YOUR deamnd) part 2 of my story!!! I need a name for it.....Anyone got any ideas??????
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"Soooooooo wher ya wanna gooo??" said matt dancing around infront of me as we walked out of our institution of a school. I shruged" It's completly up to you. I'm just glad I dont have to go home." I cringed at the thought of what was waiting for me. A big,smelly,stupid,angry.... I shook my head to clear my thoughs and put on my best fake smile for matt. He smiled back. "I can tell you dont wanna go home. Why is that? he said moving closer to me as we walked.I shruged again and avoided looking him in the eye. He grabbed my shoulders." Maggie.....I know thers something." I looked down and pulled up my shirt to exposed my batterd sides."My step dad got violent again." He gently hugged me as the tear's started slipping out of my eyes."You gotta get outa ther maggie.You cant keep going on like this.Cant your mom see that he's a jackass?" I shook my head" She called me a dirty rotten liar last time I tried to tell her about it.And it's not like I can tell anyone..They dont let me talk to anyone and my step dad thretend to kick my ass worse than usual if I told anyone." More tears slid down my face as he let go of me. "Maggpie, If you wont do anything I will." I smield abit. I loved when he called me that. It felt like I had someone who loved me when he did. I got into the passenger seat of his car and put my seat belt on."So, Wher are we off to?" I asked."Oh hunn, You'll see."
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Like my cliffhanger? Haha. I suck at writing but yea know...Like kalinka said, Theriputic.Makes me feel better.
Yeeahum,
Jesse
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"Soooooooo wher ya wanna gooo??" said matt dancing around infront of me as we walked out of our institution of a school. I shruged" It's completly up to you. I'm just glad I dont have to go home." I cringed at the thought of what was waiting for me. A big,smelly,stupid,angry.... I shook my head to clear my thoughs and put on my best fake smile for matt. He smiled back. "I can tell you dont wanna go home. Why is that? he said moving closer to me as we walked.I shruged again and avoided looking him in the eye. He grabbed my shoulders." Maggie.....I know thers something." I looked down and pulled up my shirt to exposed my batterd sides."My step dad got violent again." He gently hugged me as the tear's started slipping out of my eyes."You gotta get outa ther maggie.You cant keep going on like this.Cant your mom see that he's a jackass?" I shook my head" She called me a dirty rotten liar last time I tried to tell her about it.And it's not like I can tell anyone..They dont let me talk to anyone and my step dad thretend to kick my ass worse than usual if I told anyone." More tears slid down my face as he let go of me. "Maggpie, If you wont do anything I will." I smield abit. I loved when he called me that. It felt like I had someone who loved me when he did. I got into the passenger seat of his car and put my seat belt on."So, Wher are we off to?" I asked."Oh hunn, You'll see."
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Like my cliffhanger? Haha. I suck at writing but yea know...Like kalinka said, Theriputic.Makes me feel better.
Yeeahum,
Jesse
posted by The whisper in your ear at 1:38 PM
3 Comments:
I'm glad that I got you to write this.
Also, cliffhangers are fun to write, n'est-ce pas? They are fun for everyone, except those that end up reading them.
To be continued?
Marr Vell
Maggegg,
Never stop venting. Venting prevents explosion. It need not be a story with an end. Actually I wrote a story like this once, and it was just me...only with a different name...and with things turning out a little different than they actually did in real-life. Very theraputic.
*falls off cliff*
Ouf!
Write more when you are ready.
Now, if you will excuse me - I must find my way back up to the top of that cliff that I failed to hang from.
*grabs hiking equipment*
Argh! This is heavy. I can't possibly carry this.
Kalinka Gets Back To The Top Of The Cliff She Fell Off Of: A Dramatic Work
(KALINKA BLUE is at the bottom of a cliff, carrying a giant backpack. She grunts under the pressure. )
Kalinka -
At this rate, I'll be stuck down here forever. Blah. How will I ever get up with all this hiking gear that was conveniently down here?
(MARR VELL enters from the right. He is whistling.)
Kalinka -
Marr Vell!
Marr -
( Turns head and points finger. ) Yo.
Kalinka -
( Slaps forehead. ) "Yo"...you know what? I won't even ask. I need help with this pack.
Marr -
What do you need help with?
Kalinka -
Carry it for me.
Marr -
No way, sistah!
Kalinka -
( Groans. )
Marr -
Seriously Kalinka, I'm not having this conversation with. Everytime you ask me to do something for you, I end up carrying something way too heavy or with a mob chasing me.
( Five minutes pass. The two are halfway up the cliff. )
Marr -
( Carrying the backpack. Attempts to wave his arms in protest. ) How did this even happen? Argh!
Kalinka -
( Smiles. )
( End. )
See you at the top,
-Kalinka.
with you*
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