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The pain has just started. I watch as the blood driped slowly onto the floor. It felt like someone tied a brick to my stomac and dropped it. With a quivering hand I touched the body. He was lifless and cold. I couldnt belive what I had done.
20
I droped the knife and bolted for the door. He deserved it. I touched my bleeding forhead as I remeberd what he did. I shudderd and looked down at my torn,blood stained clothes. He had it coming. I figured I should change so I ran upstairs and changed my now red clothes.
10
What a fitting day for a murder. The rain pouring down on me, thunger crashing, lightinting striking. I could feel the water splashing up the back of my leg as I ran. When I got to the main road I started to walk, You know to avoid suspision. It felt like I had bin walking forever without seeing some form of life. Until I heard the sirens.
End
I kicked my leg's and screamed."YOU CANT FORCE ME!!!!" It had bin 3 week's scince I killed him and 3 week's scince I had bin put in this..this horrible place. The doctors threw me up against my wall and I felt the peircing feeling of the needel going into my neck. I felt my breathing slow down and my body relaxe."Now,Would you like to tell us again why you did what you did?" I just hung my head and said my peice. I was done fighting. They would never belive me. I mean come on, Would you belive me?.....Wait would you? Please... Help me. I fell un- consiouse.
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Well I got this great idea in school to write something ever ten minutes. And that is what I came up with. Enjoy.
Dark ideas from my dark self,
Jesse
The pain has just started. I watch as the blood driped slowly onto the floor. It felt like someone tied a brick to my stomac and dropped it. With a quivering hand I touched the body. He was lifless and cold. I couldnt belive what I had done.
20
I droped the knife and bolted for the door. He deserved it. I touched my bleeding forhead as I remeberd what he did. I shudderd and looked down at my torn,blood stained clothes. He had it coming. I figured I should change so I ran upstairs and changed my now red clothes.
10
What a fitting day for a murder. The rain pouring down on me, thunger crashing, lightinting striking. I could feel the water splashing up the back of my leg as I ran. When I got to the main road I started to walk, You know to avoid suspision. It felt like I had bin walking forever without seeing some form of life. Until I heard the sirens.
End
I kicked my leg's and screamed."YOU CANT FORCE ME!!!!" It had bin 3 week's scince I killed him and 3 week's scince I had bin put in this..this horrible place. The doctors threw me up against my wall and I felt the peircing feeling of the needel going into my neck. I felt my breathing slow down and my body relaxe."Now,Would you like to tell us again why you did what you did?" I just hung my head and said my peice. I was done fighting. They would never belive me. I mean come on, Would you belive me?.....Wait would you? Please... Help me. I fell un- consiouse.
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Well I got this great idea in school to write something ever ten minutes. And that is what I came up with. Enjoy.
Dark ideas from my dark self,
Jesse
posted by The whisper in your ear at 1:36 PM
2 Comments:
Jesse!
Oh, I really enjoyed this. Murderrr. You do it well. If you're ever bored, you'd probably do good at writing, like, a psychological thriller. Ooooh! Yes, definitely.
Kalinkat.
How do you do this? I can't write about murder. Not tastefully anyway. It's rare, but I've tried before and it's always turned out brutal. You've successfully made me see the killer as the victim, obviously your intent, whereas I can't seem to do that.
Envious,
Marr Vell
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